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smart just a small note, the separating line is thick, but nice idea

I like the idea.
The art direction could be better.

niiice, I like the twist
Though i have a closeup comment: if you look closer to the stain you notice it’s dissolving at the edges. Back-firing on the idea, it says “this ink dissolves, even before”
correct me if I’m wrong.

A strong attempt at a good idea…just one pointer…BEFORE and AFTER what? If you’re trying to imply ‘washing’ how do you expect everyone to grasp that?

I got it…but it’s not that obvious. A good overall ad, though!

Hey like your idea, but i guess you have to take a look at all the perspectives.firstly how did the ink stain get there is there a problem with the marker ?? i do know that people hate ink stains cause it is a real hassle to get them off clothes

i am not sure if the target audience would be very kind to your idea and consider you to be a stereotype of annoying stains

your concept approached diffrently may win the audience but it is still risky as a print ad

another BEFORE-AFTER thing!… guyz c’mon!.. do some really kickass stuff!

anyways.. thought is nice

I don’t see the benefit or the advantage since any other brand of permanent pen can do this to a white shirt. Besides, the permant attributes of a pen is not something you strongly ache for – unless you’re a freaking vandal.

Cool idea…