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i would suggest to remove the headline because its not working with the visual + to remove all the copy because there are too much information’s in one conceptual ad !!!

abdalla man, where are you these days? are you in amman ?

Biteme, i totally agree with you about burning the national symbols but I disagree with you about the headline because this headline in specific has got nothing to do with the visual!! overall I don’t like this ad

I think the visual is too common (cliché) and it would never lure the reader deep into the copy. The use of the Cedar Tree (poor tree) has been raped for centuries now, I guess creatives from this part of the world has to know that there’s more other visuals that can be used instead of going “the easy way out”. NO it didn’t work for me either.

you are the man in black, i know you dude ,, where are you working these days ?

i would like to add a tiny comment, all what abdullah said and restless is right, but about the passport, its from left to right, shouldn’t it be from right to left?? please correct me if am wrong…

Ammar, this is a conceptual press ad and not an announcement ad which means that it should be single minded so no details and points needed to deliver the message (it doesn’t matter if its a poster or magazine ad), so if there anything they want to highlight in details they can design a leaflet or a brochure to highlight more details and point,,,,, actually this is how I see it ….

Thanks

restless, thank you, good point, actually i hate to see that uch of text on a poster or anything… i guess the client asked for that text, coz who did this good re-touching and image is not that fool to put that text on the ad…

ammar, to educate the client is the key

If you all want a good laugh look at posts 4 and 6 above.

As we all know it’s the same person….Amre.

Funny stuff,

Finally you agreed with everyone else that yes you truly are a retard!

I like the visual of the burning cedar whoever did the fotoshop work did a great job.

Dunno what the headline says and I don’t care as the visual is so strong… agree there’s too much copy…. anyway…. no one reads copy anymore.

Otherwise good stuff Grey,

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Please try not to pass anything like rasps, hack saws or long knotted sheets as they will be detected under the xray machine.

BTW If he’s taking a pee Restles will step in for him and take all messages.

nice work